rough of the opening scene

The opening scene has been roughed out. I'm trying to figure out what needs to change. I know I haven't moved the fingers of the Mic zombie. I plan on doing that later. Also, the audio is 4 frames off, as I added a pause in between prerecorded lines. I felt this gave it a much needed extra beat. I may do that elsewhere in the scene as well. Suggestions are more than welcomed.